Five Things to Avoid for a Pristine Query Letter

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Carolyn Howard-Johnson

by Carolyn Howard-Johnson

We are selling our work when we approach any gatekeeper, an editor, an agent, a contest judge. Here are five little things to avoid so you’ll look like the professional you are.

  • Don’t tell the gatekeeper you always wanted to write. You can think of something more pertinent to your cause (and something more original!) than that.
  • Don’t use the verb “quote” when you want the noun “quotation.” Some stylebooks will tell you that it’s OK, but agents can be a picky lot. Use zero-tolerance grammar rules for your queries.
  • Don’t pitch more than one book at time. You want to give just one your best shot.
  • Don’t call your novel a “fictional novel.” By definition, a novel is fiction.
  • Don’t overdo exclamation marks, question marks, or the use of sentence fragments. (Yes, fragments are acceptable when they’re used for a good reason.).

Here’s one last suggestion for fiction writers ’cause they’re so often neglected when it comes to marketing. Avoid using italics for internal thought in the synopses sections of your marketing tools or in the sample chapters you must include. Italics are being used more and more these days, but using them often becomes a crutch that enables writers to avoid writing great transitions and point-of-view. The best agents and publishers will recognize it as such.

Pretreatment Guide for Homeless Outreach & Housing First, 2nd Ed

SKU 979-8-89656-093-7
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Helping Couples, Youth, and Unaccompanied Adults,
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UPC: 979-8-89656-093-7
Brand: Loving Healing Press
Binding: Paperback
Audiobook: Audible, iTunes
Edition: 2nd
Author: Jay S. Levy
Pages: 216
Publication Date: 01/01/2026

he new edition of Pretreatment Guide for Homeless Outreach & Housing First (2026) features the following:

  • New Author's Preface
  • New Introduction by Robin Johnson, Leader of the Psychologically Informed Environments movement
  • Updated chapters including new insights on creating a positive work culture and instituting Reflective Practice: Transforming Supervision to Co-vision
  • Expanded Appendix: 2025 Interview of Jay S. Levy by Dr Bob Rich, Australian blogger and psychologist
  • Improved format and layout

This book provides social workers, outreach clinicians, case managers, and concerned community members with a pretreatment guide for assisting homeless couples, youth, and single adults. The interrelationship between Homeless Outreach and Housing First is examined in detail to inform program development and hands-on practice. Pretreatment Guide for Homeless Outreach & Housing First shares five detailed case studies from the field to elucidate effective ways of helping and to demonstrate how the most vulnerable among us cana overcome trauma and homelessness.

Readers will:

  • Expand their assessment skills and discover new interventions for helping people who have experienced long-term or chronic homelessness.
  • Understand and be able to integrate the stages of common language construction with their own practice.
  • Learn about the positive measurable impact of a Housing First approach and its moral, fiscal, and quality of life implications.
  • Understand how to better integrate program policy and supervision with Homeless Outreach & Housing First initiatives.
  • Learn how to utilize a Pretreatment Approach with couples, youth, and unaccompanied adults experiencing untreated major mental illness and addiction.

"Jay S. Levy's book is essential reading to both people new to the movement to end homelessness and folks who have been in the trenches for many years. Learn how to do effective outreach with the chronic homeless population, and the ins and outs of the Housing First model. The personal stories and the success cases will give inspiration to work even harder to help both individuals and for ending homelessness in your community." -- Michael Stoops, Director of Community Organizing, National Coalition for the Homeless, Washington, DC

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